Submitting Your Work: Really Useful Links by Lucy O’Callaghan

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Lucy O'Callaghan

Submitting your work to literary agents is a significant step in the journey towards traditional publication. For many writers, the querying process can feel daunting, as it requires not only a strong manuscript but also careful research, a persuasive pitch, and a professional approach. Literary agents receive many submissions, so writers must ensure their work is polished, understand which agents are the best fit for their genre, and create a compelling query letter that captures the essence of their story. I have compiled some useful articles and podcasts that share tips on submitting your work to literary agents.

How To Write | Write for success | How to submit your novel to agents | Writers Online

This article from Writers Online explains that successfully finding a literary agent depends on preparing a strong, professional submission rather than rushing the process. It emphasises that the query letter is a sales pitch, not simply a cover letter, and that its primary purpose is to make an agent want to read the manuscript. It recommends structuring a 250-word pitch around four key elements: the protagonist, the inciting incident, the main opposition, and the central dilemma or stakes.

How to Pitch Your Novel

How to Pitch Your Novel to Literary Agents: The Complete Guide – The Manuscript Academy

The Manuscript Academy explains that an effective novel pitch is designed to spark an agent’s curiosity rather than summarise the entire story. Drawing on advice from literary agents, it recommends using the Place-Person-Pivot structure to quickly establish the setting, introduce a memorable protagonist, and present the event that launches the story. The article cautions against common mistakes such as excessive world-building, vague stakes, leading with themes instead of plot, or overwhelming listeners with unnecessary detail.

TLC-How-to-Submit-to-a-Literary-Agent.pdf

This guide provides advice on preparing a professional submission package for literary agents, emphasising that careful preparation significantly improves an author’s chances of success. It advises writers to follow each agent’s submission guidelines exactly, submit only a fully completed and thoroughly revised manuscript, and research agents to ensure their interests align with the work being submitted. You should tailor each submission rather than sending generic emails, present the manuscript professionally, and write a concise, engaging covering letter and synopsis.

The Dos and Don’ts of Submitting

The top 10 do’s and don’ts of submitting to literary agents – The Writer

This article presents ten practical guidelines to help authors submit professionally and avoid common mistakes that can lead to immediate rejection. It advises writers to submit only when their manuscript is fully polished, thoroughly research agents to ensure they represent the appropriate genre, and carefully follow each agent’s submission guidelines. It’s important to write a concise query letter and blurb that focus on the main character and central conflict while clearly stating the manuscript’s title, genre, and word count. It also encourages authors to project confidence without exaggeration, include only relevant writing credentials, and avoid gimmicks such as unusual fonts, cover mock-ups, and inflated claims about the book’s commercial success.

How To Write | Write for success | How to submit your novel to agents | Writers Online

Securing a literary agent requires a well-prepared, strategic submission rather than a rushed approach. The query letter is a persuasive pitch whose purpose is to make an agent want to read the manuscript, and writers should focus on presenting a compelling summary of the story, particularly its protagonist, conflict, and stakes. Writers should avoid common mistakes such as querying agents who do not represent their genre, submitting before the manuscript is fully polished, or demonstrating a poor understanding of the market.

Podcasts on Submitting Your Work

Revise & Resubmits, Editorial Notes + Finding The Hook of Your Book with Agent Jessica Watterson – The Manuscript Academy

Literary agent Jessica Watterson explains what makes a manuscript stand out after a revision request, how agents evaluate revise-and-resubmit submissions, and why identifying a strong hook is essential when querying.

What Literary Agents Look for in a Query Letter (with Ann Rose)

Ann Rose provides a step-by-step explanation of what makes a query letter effective. She discusses writing a strong hook, presenting clear stakes, understanding current publishing expectations, preparing a synopsis, and what happens after an agent requests the full manuscript.

The First Draft Club Podcast – S10 E24 How to Write a Great Query Letter: Interview with Hannah Brattesani, our New In-House Literary Agent at The Book Incubator | Free Listening on Podbean App

In this episode, literary agent Hannah Brattesani explains what catches an agent’s attention when opening a query email and identifies the most common mistakes writers make. She discusses how to develop an effective logline, choose strong comparable titles, distinguish between commercial and literary fiction, and respond to rejection constructively.

Building a Connection

Successfully submitting to literary agents is about more than simply sending out a manuscript; it is about building a connection between the writer, their story, and the publishing industry. A well-crafted submission demonstrates an understanding of the market, respect for agents’ time, and confidence in the quality of the work. While rejection is a common part of the process, each submission provides an opportunity to refine the pitch, strengthen the manuscript, and learn more about the publishing landscape. I hope you have found this week’s column useful. Good luck with your submissions!

(c) Lucy O’Callaghan

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About the author

Writing since she was a child, Lucy penned her first story with her father called Arthur’s Arm, at the ripe old age of eight. She has been writing ever since. Inspired by her father’s love of the written word and her mother’s encouragement through a constant supply of wonderful stationary, she wrote short stories for her young children, which they subsequently illustrated.
A self-confessed people watcher, stories that happen to real people have always fascinated her and this motivated her move to writing contemporary women’s fiction. Her writing has been described as pacy, human, moving and very real.
Lucy has been part of a local writing group for over ten years and has taken creative writing classes with Paul McVeigh, Jamie O’Connell and Curtis Brown Creative. She truly found her tribe when she joined Writer’s Ink in May 2020. Experienced in beta reading and critiquing, her debut novel, The Lies Beneath is out now, published by Poolbeg. Lucy’s second novel, Obsession, will be published on 1st April 2025.
Follow her on Instagram: lucy.ocallaghan.31. Facebook and Twitter: @LucyCOCallaghan

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